Analysis of dissertations

The first dissertation that I have read aims 'To find out whether the perception of an image can be changed by adjusting the quality of the ambient sound effects'. The author of this dissertation provides the context for his/her project aim in the introduction where they explain the effect of ambient sound and then pose the question of how this can influence how the audience percieves the film. Therefore the author has identified a problem to be solved which would seem to give a strong project rationale. This is in line with the marking scheme that says for a B there needs to be reference to context. They then go on to identify areas of research that they will need to undertake and further justify the areas of research. In the literature review, the author shows that they have done extensive background research into the subject area and relates it directly to the scope of their project. This would seem to act as clear evidence of analytical research which is required to get a B. Also there is clear example of project development and a careful attention to detail in the next section where the author makes sure they are covering all the areas that are relevent to the project. It is also clear that for every statement that they make, they are justifying by reference to literature, some of which is academic. although there is quite a lot of internet material.

After the research section, the author talks about the methodology. They present this very clearly and show evidence of critical thinking in order to solve the problem of there being two versions of the same film and all the considerations that come under the scope of their project. This would seem to ensure that the survey is unbiased and makes sure the results are going to be measurable against the critical framework that has been established through what the author says will be researched. The author shows the results of the survey visually so that it is clear. The overall conclusion though does seem a bit short for an honours dissertation.

Overall, the grade would probably be the lower end of a B. The author has done extensive research and uses much high quality research material to assist his/her project. There is much evidence of the development of concept and the overall aim identifys a problem to be solved. Also, there is critical thought been applied.